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100 word challenge – By George

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

 

ALIAN IN AMERACA

 

She was shocked to see a portal she was on her way home from detention but suddenly an alian walked through the portal he looked about 1 foot tall she had not done her 100 word challenge so she had detention she had not wanted to do her 100 word challenge she would tell her mom but the alian was hiding in the bin the alian said help me get home the girl said ok they snuck into area 51 whitch was the only entrence to puto his home planet the alian ran into the portal he made it. THE END

 

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4 Comments

  1. By: Ari on February 16, 2016 at 4:47 pm      Reply

    Hi George! I like how you were like “She was shocked to see” It is a very nice opening grab for the reader. I also liked how you incorporated the 100 Word Challenge in your writing. Why did you think of doing that?

  2. By: Kevin D on February 26, 2016 at 6:13 pm      Reply

    Hi George! I love how you wrote about aliens for your 100 word challenge. I think your teacher was very smart to think about the 100 word challenge. What do you have to do in the 100 word challenge? Do you have any siblings or pets? Where do you live? I an really looking forward to seeing you.

  3. By: Stella on February 26, 2016 at 9:21 pm      Reply

    Hi George! I like your blog on how your wrote it. When I was reading it, because of the first sentence you wrote in your blog. I liked it because it made interested in to the rest of the blog. And what is the 100 word challenge?

  4. By: Stella on February 26, 2016 at 9:22 pm      Reply

    Hi George! I like your blog on how your wrote it. When I was reading it, because of the first sentence you wrote in your blog. I liked it because it made interested in to the rest of the blog. And what is the 100 word challenge? What is it for? Was it fun to do?

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