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100 word challenge – By Maisy

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 5 Comments |

The morning

 

It was the day where she would find out her results … to get in to the school she wanted to go to. But it was a normal day at school she would do: maths, English and P.E. she met her friends. After school she lied on her comfy bed, was she dreaming or not?  She asked herself. The letter with a red stamp on it she opened it. Her dream could come true in three minutes   she was shocked to see… she smiled with a warming twinkle   in her eye! Her mum hugged her in happiness. She got in!

 

 

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging
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5 Comments

  1. By: Jenna on February 16, 2016 at 5:02 pm      Reply

    I really liked the story you wrote! Were you supposed to write exactly 100 words or could you write about that much? I was wondering what school did the girl want to go to? I also have some questions for you. What’s your favorite subject in school? Mine is probably math, writing, or reading. What’s your favorite sport? My favorite sports are volleyball, basketball, and softball. What time does school start and end for you? In case you wanted to know, we start school at 8:00 and go until 3:00. Your story was good, and I hope you reply back!

    • By: maisy on February 25, 2016 at 2:58 pm      Reply

      I was meant to 100 words + my title and the words they gave me ” she was shocked to see… ”
      my favourite subject in school is maths and science. The girl in my story wanted to get into a grammar school. My favourite sport is swimming dew to the fact I started swimming at 3 years old!!! Our school starts at 9:00 to 3:30

  2. By: Kalani on February 26, 2016 at 9:23 pm      Reply

    I really like how you make everything so mysterious, which makes even a short story interesting.
    I also have a question for you.
    Where do you live and what is it like there?
    what is your favorite food?
    and do you have any pets

    • By: maisy on March 4, 2016 at 3:32 pm      Reply

      I live in Manchester and I love all the schools here. Yes I do have pets like a dog called Biff and two cats.
      do you have any pets? My favorite type of food is pizza what is yours?

  3. By: Martha on March 2, 2016 at 12:47 pm      Reply

    That is the coolest story I have heard in a long time I loved the idea of the monster created by the potion. WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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