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100 word challenge- Silence (By Lily)

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

Silence
It was an indescribable sight. It stared right at me. His golden eyes were like little balls of blazing golden fires trying to burn inside my soul. Kronos heard me trying to step away he roared “oh Perseus Jackson how dare you back away from the mighty Kronos!” Somebody else was in the background screaming with the pain and agony of the heat. Athena, god of wisdom, Annabeth’s Mother. She was shocked to see Annabeth standing with Nico and Grover. Hades stood next to Athena forcing her head down. ”Why don’t you come fight me? Too scared to?” Kronos Laughed. Silence haunted the battle ground. Dreams.

By Lily

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging, Uncategorized
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4 Comments

  1. By: Ethan on February 17, 2016 at 4:46 pm      Reply

    I really like how you like that you wrote about percy jackson. Do you like percy jackson or do you read the series? Do you play any sports? What do you want to be when you grow up? I really like how you made your story really exciting, and it made me want to keep reading on. I really like how you read the story and made it into your own story.

    • By: Lily Year 6b (Digital Leader) on February 25, 2016 at 2:59 pm      Reply

      Hi Ethan i hope you enjoyed it. I do read Percy Jackson and i have read the series apart from the last book. I play netball and i like to swim. i really want to be as NASA engineer when i’m older!!!

  2. By: Maddie on February 21, 2016 at 2:16 pm      Reply

    Hi Lily. I really like the way that you have used the story line of Percy Jackson but have completely changed the way that you have written it.
    P.S you won’t have read all of the Percy Jackson books because there is one black book that includes three of his adventures and lots of facts. Turns out that you are not as much of a Percy Jackson nerd as I thought you were!

  3. By: Annika on February 25, 2016 at 7:21 pm      Reply

    This writing made me think about the time I wrote a story about a boat in the night on the waves. I discovered that we have something in common. I liked the paragraph that you wrote. And I love to write stories, and read stories, especially dramatic ones. I remember at the start of the year when I wrote a story called “the Soap Thief” It was a continuation of one that I wrote last year, in 4th grade, called “Hidden Treasure”.

    -Annika

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