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High above – By Aneya

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 5 Comments |

Nala had been walking for hours. Argent for a drink she was shocked to see that she had made it to the top of the rocky mountain. Now that she had made it to the top she had to she had to get the flag and go back but she did not want to. Should I go back? Is it the right thing to do? Will I last out here? “Its very cold” she gulped. But then looked behind her at the spectacular view. The view was too nice to go home, but it was very cold. She slipped. She was second thinking her decision

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5 Comments

  1. By: Matthew on February 16, 2016 at 5:51 pm      Reply

    nice story about climbing the Rocky Mountains. If i was climbing the Rocky Mountains do I need to take a flag that is all the way at the top. Did any of your family history climbed the Rocky Mountain. Do you ever wished to climb the Rocky Mountain.well have a good day and respond please :] 🙂 :0 good bye.

  2. By: Jessica on February 23, 2016 at 8:15 pm      Reply

    well done aneya
    I really liked the way you have used rhetorical questions I really enjoyed reading your story well done 🙂

  3. By: Naomi on February 26, 2016 at 6:02 pm      Reply

    Nice Aneya! My name is Naomi. I’m in 5th grade and I attend Meyerholz Elementary School in San Jose, California. I like the way you wrote the story. It has a lot of thoughts written in it. I also like the way you used quotations and dialogue. I wonder where you live? And I hope I can see you in person!

  4. By: Naomi on February 26, 2016 at 6:12 pm      Reply

    Nice Aneya! My name is Naomi. I’m in 5th grade and I attend Meyerholz Elementary School in San Jose, California. I like the way you wrote the story. It has a lot of thoughts written in it. I also like the way you used quotations and dialogue. I wonder where you live? And I hope I can see you in person!
    Sorry, I typed the email wrong.

  5. By: Sophie on February 26, 2016 at 9:12 pm      Reply

    Hi! my name is Sophie from Mr Garrison´s (California, U.S.A.).I wonder what inspired you to write about the Rocky Mountain.Also, I don´t really get what you´re talking about. Is this place a real place? In your blog, you said that Nala had to go home, but she did not want to. I think that usually happens to people.

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