header image

My tree – By Oliver

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

She was shocked to see it! What monsters, how could they. She ran towards it but it was too late She knew she couldn’t save it now. It had already began to disintegrate, she watched the embers flutter down like the leaves it once dropped. She looked around desperately for the criminals, but nothing met her eyes, they were too flooded with tears to see anything. She wiped them. Now she could see clearly but she was too late! They had gone. The entire oak was now engulfed in flames, she knew it was gone. She looked around her,that was when she saw it!!

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging, Uncategorized
Tags:

4 Comments

  1. By: Austin on February 16, 2016 at 4:49 pm      Reply

    That was amazing Oliver! Maybe I should take writing lesson from you. You are really good at writing. How did you get so good? Do like writing? I enjoyed reading that.

  2. By: Oliver Year 6b on February 25, 2016 at 2:55 pm      Reply

    Thanks Austin! Trying to get it to 100 words was really tricky.

  3. By: Austin T on February 25, 2016 at 7:04 pm      Reply

    Hi Oliver. I think that was amazing! I wish I could write as good as you. I loved how you wrote with so much details. When I read that, I felt like i was in the story. I wonder what amazing story you will create next.

  4. By: Matthew Wu on February 26, 2016 at 6:04 pm      Reply

    After reading your excerpt from your story, I had a feeling that urged me to read more. You are such an awesome writer! I loved how you put the reader in the story. I would like to read whatever you create out of your imagination next!

Leave a response






Your response:

Categories