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THE BIG BANG – By Rakhi

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

The story I’m going to tell you is about a day, a day which was like no other .It starts with a girl called Lily. Lily was a girl who kept her head in books and did experiments with her chemistry set. One day lily came home with a solution that her science teacher gave. The teacher told lily to find what was in it. So lily set to the challenge, she got her chemistry set and pulled out some chemicals. She started testing the solution but knocked a chemical in it. She was shocked to see a monster was born from a big bang.

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4 Comments

  1. By: Cali on February 16, 2016 at 4:56 pm      Reply

    Hi Rakhi,
    That sounds fun! I wish I was a person like Lily! I also like books and science. I want to try doing the 100 word challenge. It sounds challenging! I like how you describe how she’s feeling. How were you feeling when you wrote it? I can say that I was a little confused but then I reread it and now I get it. I was wondering a little bit about you. What is your favorite sport? What is your favorite color? My favorite sport is basketball. My favorite colors are pink and purple. I hope you write back to me!

  2. By: Lauren on February 26, 2016 at 6:16 pm      Reply

    Wow this is so cool! I love this story… I was wondering do you have a sibling? I have one he is so annoying ( little brother). What is your favorite subjects in school? mine are art and music.
    Whatis your favorite animal? Mine is a pig. I was wondering about the pet pig. What type of a pig is it, is it Potbelly ? Anyway I hope I can learn more about you!!!!

  3. By: Kevin W on February 26, 2016 at 9:10 pm      Reply

    That sounds like a good story Rakhi! i like to read fiction, nonfiction, fantasy, and science books.My class never did 100 words, so I’d love to try it.I don’t have a favorite sport and my hobby is reading. have you visited the Buckington Palace? Did you see the Big ben? What are your hobbies and what is your favorite sport? I hope you write back to me!Oh ya does it snow there, cause it doesn’t snow here!

    • By: Rakhi on March 4, 2016 at 3:40 pm      Reply

      Hi kevin W I like reading to .What is your favourite book and why also it was snowing today and yes I have been to buckingum palace but I have not met the queen .Also I have seen big ben.THanks for commenting.

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