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The Darkness – By Katerina

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

The darkness
Amazed, shocked, worried it happened. She was shocked to see it: her worst nightmare. She couldn’t believe it. She was ready to come face to face with her worst nightmare: the dark forest.
It has been said that one step in the dark forest never come out. But she had to do it because of the key. The key that will bring back colours to the rainbow. The key that will bring the happiness to life. But millions of people went and never been seen for years.
She smiled at Eve boldly and went in. (Inside however she had cold blood running through her heart.)

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4 Comments

  1. By: Alexandria on February 18, 2016 at 4:57 pm      Reply

    Your writing was absolutely amazing! It is very detailed and sounds like a book that I would read if it was in one. Did you have a hard time coming up with details to write? When I read this, I was able to visualize it very well. You also did an excellent job at explaining certain things. Have you ever considered becoming an author? I think you would be a great author.

  2. By: Joanne on February 26, 2016 at 6:04 pm      Reply

    Hello, Katerina. I’m Joanne. Your writing is very good! It sounds very exciting and you made it very detailed. You must be a great author. I can see everything you wrote. You can add more detail about the characters, like what they look like.

  3. By: ronya on March 4, 2016 at 3:38 pm      Reply

    Amazing!

  4. By: Katerina on March 4, 2016 at 3:52 pm      Reply

    Hi, thank you for your messages i thought they were really interesting and useful:-)

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