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The Death Whisperer – By Maddie

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

Hello. My name is Amy (or rather it was). I am going to tell you the story of the death whisperer. But before I begin, there is one thing I need to tell you: there is something out there. Something that’s indescribable. Something they tried to hide from me. Here is how the story began:

 

I was walking to school, when I bumped into my best friend Kacey. We had been together for as long as I could remember.

“Amy!” She was shocked to see me. I stared at her, puzzled, bewildered. Then it happened: I saw black. I screamed. I was dead for sure…

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4 Comments

  1. By: Janey on February 16, 2016 at 4:57 pm      Reply

    Maddie-
    HI, my name is Janey! I really liked your post! It had GREAT describing words! I really want to hear what happened to Amy. It was a suspenseful story! Keep up the great work!
    -Janey

  2. By: Daniel on February 26, 2016 at 6:05 pm      Reply

    I really like your description words! I also really think your pig thing is really fun to play with!

  3. By: Rocco on February 26, 2016 at 9:02 pm      Reply

    Hi! My name is Rocco L. I really liked your discriptive words and adjectives! Do you really have a class pet pig? And how is it like in England? What are your interests? My interests are Video Games and Adventuring. Well… nice to meet you!

  4. By: Ruby on March 31, 2016 at 2:13 pm      Reply

    Hi Maddie I love your story! I especially liked the fact that you made the reader hang on edge so lots of questions go round your head.
    Is Amy a ghost?
    Why did it go black?
    Did she die?
    Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeee write a second book I am dying to know what happens next.
    In hope you become an author to!

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