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The end of the line – By Eleanor

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |

I remember her stumbling on the gravel in her 6 inch heels. I remember the gloomy deflated look that showed on her heavily made up face. I remember her trembling, chapped lips just making out the words “it’s the end of the line.”

It was a normal day at school when my teacher called me out of my lesson to talk to me. I knew it wasn’t good because she was frowning. I remember the exact words that came out of her red, mat lips. “your dad is ill” I just stood there and I could tell she was shocked to see I was not moving…

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4 Comments

  1. By: Jessica on February 23, 2016 at 8:09 pm      

    ahh ellie this is really good!! I really want to know what will happen next well done Jessica

  2. By: Irene on February 26, 2016 at 6:05 pm      

    Hello Elanor, this story made me think, Why did you have to wear 6 inch heels? Also, I do not think that I understand the 2 paragraphs going together, because if in the first paragraph you were wearing heels, and the next paragraph you were talking about your teacher telling you something. I’m not sure if they go together.

    • By: eleanor on March 4, 2016 at 3:35 pm      

      it was a flash back when her dad started to get ill.

  3. By: Isaya on February 26, 2016 at 9:16 pm      

    Hi, I am Isaya. I live in USA, California. Do you think we will have anything in common? I like to read, do you? What is your favorite color? Mine is light blue, pink, and purple. By the way, you did a good job on your writing! What happens next?

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