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The envelope – by Sam

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 2 Comments |

The envelope

Life has changed now, it’s very different from your life. Instead of dyeing from age you get an envelope saying how long you’re to live for. A girl standing next to me has just opened her envelope: she was shocked to see 20 years.

It depends on: what you look like, how intelligent you are and how fit and strong you are. I’m not very intelligent or good looking but a bit sporty. I hear the lowest is 15 minutes. Anyway I go to the scanner get my injection it didn’t hurt that much but it did a bit. I open the envelope it said …

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging
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  1. By: kennedy on February 16, 2016 at 4:59 pm      Reply

    Hi sam I am your quadblog partner. I herd you and your class are doing the 100 word challange that seems fun!!!!! You have a very good word choice in your story. You spark my reading and I bet you can spark other peoples reading too if they read your story.

  2. By: Freya on April 25, 2016 at 3:06 pm      Reply

    That story is amazing. In the 500 word challenge there is a story like that called all the time in the world it even ends on the same cliff hanger. We had to write the ending for it for our show me.

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