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Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 4 Comments |


She looked out the window and she was surprised to see on the farm was a brand new tractor as she went over to it and heard a gunshot. The world went dark and she went rigid and didn’t even remember hitting the floor. When she woke up she was in a cold room with a Man with no features watching her the man spoke in a raspy voice. The man took out a knife and said ‘’I could kill you if I wanted to.’’ He stuck the knife in her shoulder. Suddenly she woke was it a dream or was it not…

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging


  1. By: Megan on February 16, 2016 at 5:02 pm      Reply

    Hi Fionn, I’m Megan. I really like the tension and describing words in your story. It drew me in and I wonder what is supposed happen next. I hope to try the 100 word challenge. Does your story have to be exactly 100 words, or can it be more or less? My classmates and I have been counting words, and almost no one has 100 words only. That doesn’t really matter though. More words make it a better story! I will like reading your next posts. Keep up the great work!


    • By: Fionn on February 25, 2016 at 2:56 pm      Reply

      It had to have 105 words because we had to use “she was shocked to see” in it and 100 words and thank you for your comment.

  2. By: Ryan on February 26, 2016 at 6:09 pm      Reply

    Hello, my name is Ryan. I like the adjectives you put in your writing, it made it seem that I saw the person going to the tractor. I also liked how you made it so you had an ending that made me wonder what would happen next.

  3. By: michael on February 26, 2016 at 9:16 pm      Reply

    Hi my names Michael. I liked you story. Good job using adjectives. it sounds nice to do. do you have to count your word to make sure you have 100?

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