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The Shadow – By Jordi

Posted by: | February 11, 2016 | 3 Comments |

THE SHADOW

 

The wind started to appear again as Lauren took another few steps into the mansion. The floorboards creaked and the clock ticked. Lauren searched the dining, living room and then the kitchen looking for her lost younger brother. Waaaaa! A horrible crying of a baby came from upstairs. Waaaaa! There it was again. She crept up the long spiral stairs listening for any sign of her brother. Lauren heard running from not that far away. A shadow stared at her. Then it vanished as if it was never there. The shadow appeared again. Or was it a shadow? She was surprised to see her brother!

under: English, Literacy, Quadblogging
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3 Comments

  1. By: Matthew on February 16, 2016 at 6:00 pm      Reply

    that was so cool and interesting my name is Matthew I can’t wait to get to know you over the next few weeks

    • By: jordi on February 25, 2016 at 3:14 pm      Reply

      Thank you Matthew for your comments on my 100 word challenge. I can’t wait either to get to know you. 🙂

  2. By: Charlene on February 25, 2016 at 7:09 pm      Reply

    Hi Jordi my name is Charlene, I hope that over the next weeks I will get to know you better. From your writing this let me think that shadows can be scary. I would like to know if this was a true story or not.
    Questions: Where are you from?
    What is your favorite subject in school?
    Do you like school?

    -charlene

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