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One hour left and counting

Posted by: | March 11, 2016 | 7 Comments |

How would you feel knowing counting the minutes left of your life to live? 1 hours seems ages but fades so quickly. The story I am about to tell is one i witnessed by my own hurt eyes. It is all about a girl called Victoria diagnosed with a terrible illness age 10. The shock on her face seemed to glare at the floor her sorrowful eyes staring deep deep into yours it was scary,overwhelming but being even more scared for her 1 hour she had to live to the fullest.

Victoria lived with her dad and 3 brothers which was hard having no mum. Thats when I come in I was the one who treated Victoria as her own as her own beloved child. But at the end of the day this is Victoria’s story not mine and not a happy one…. Back to this. How would you feel knowing every painful second of your life to live?

Counting on one individual clock tick tock tick tock. i sat with her and held her boney pale hands once again I was her mum. Her nails bitten to the last bite her eyes squeezed tightly shut with terror and the sudden lump in her throat. It was nearly here. Tick tock tick tock….went the clock.

under: English, Literacy


  1. By: Jessica on March 12, 2016 at 3:14 pm      

    Wow Anna. I really loved reading your story!!!
    well done

  2. By: aneya jazz on March 17, 2016 at 3:01 pm      

    Wow that is really good.

  3. By: Jazz on March 31, 2016 at 2:12 pm      

    I really liked your story Anna. What inspired you to write this story?
    Are you going to write another one 🙂

  4. By: Amber on April 25, 2016 at 2:49 pm      

    The advert was amazing I enjoyed it so much and I wish there was more to watch because I could watch it all day. I cant wait to do this in year 6 a very big well done to u all.

  5. By: Freya on April 25, 2016 at 2:53 pm      

    The story is amazing I really hope you write another one. The tension and drama is brilliant.

  6. By: Isobel on April 25, 2016 at 2:55 pm      

    Brilliant story!;)I LOVE the tension and drama, and the mystery!!!!keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep wri

  7. By: archie and conrad y4 on April 26, 2016 at 2:33 pm      

    that is an amazing video nothing is cooler than that! keep up the awsomenes